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15 April 2004 — Mining Life (15)

One of my classmates, James, asked an interesting question last night:

To what extent do authors mine their own life for material in their stories?

The class discussed this at length. Seth said that he never uses his own life in his writing. His life is too dull. Also, since he mainly writes speculative fiction, his own life has no relevance.

I agreed that many speculative fiction writers create their stories wholesale from their imagination, drawing only small inspiration from their real life, but argued that much of literary fiction is derived from authors' experience.

Rick noted that it's something of a cliché that every author's first novel is autobiographical. (In some cases it's the author's second novel; it's often these authors who are perceived as having a "sophomore slump".)

Of the three stories I've written in the past few months, all of them are based on personal experience. Of the characters in these three stories, every character but one is based on someone I know. And, to one degree or another, I'm the main character in every story. (Even the story with the old man photographer — that's me.)

Is this good or bad? I don't know. I suspect it's neutral.

Perhaps one writes with less imagination when mining her own life, but one is also able to tap into rawer emotions, to fabricate characters that seem real (because they are real). The key is to be able to break away from the strict confines of biography in order to craft a good story. One cannot become attached to the actual events.

For example, my latest story tells of how my half-sister, Shelley, came to live with us. Much of the first draft is factual. (Or as factual as I can recall it.) It's not a particularly good story. Last night, based on comments from classmates, and on my own feelings about the story, I realized that I need to break from reality in a number of ways for my second draft. My brothers, Jeff and Tony, will be compressed into a single character. The story will become about my relationship with Dad and Shelley, how we try to learn the balance of that relationship (but never did in real life). As the story evolves from memoir to fiction, it will gain strength, and I will lose attachment to the main characters. I'll stop thinking of the protagonist as me. (He's very much me at this point.)

But the point is: I started with my own life and the story grew from there.

Pam once told me that weblogs are presumptuous, that the authors believe their lives are more interesting than other people's lives.

I think this is incorrect.

I think that every person has an interesting life, filled with stories that might be shared. It's a matter of how this life is perceived and acted upon; if you believe your life is boring and not worth sharing, then that's the story you'll tell yourself about your life. But if you learn to see the joy and humor in all the daily details, you'll find that there are interesting stories everywhere, just waiting to be told.

Webloggers mine their lives for stories, and so do authors. Proust's seven-volume Remembrance of Things Past was an extended re-imagined autobiography. Hemingway's books all drew from his own life. Steinbeck mined his personal experience. Dickens mined his. All authors do it. Even Stephen King.

The difference between an author and you is that the author truly believes his dull little life is filled with the stuff of dreams.


Though I'm not keeping my fitness weblog any more (I need to resume!), my diet continues. I've basically been stuck at 183 pounds (down seventeen since January 15th) for six weeks. Finally, this week I've been able to adhere to my 1200-1400 calorie per day goal, and the discipline is yielding dividends. I'm down to 181. I fit into size 33 trousers last night. (I started at size 36 and have been wearing size 34 for the past six weeks.)

But I'm hungry!


I can't stop laughing.

Kris filled some plastic Easter eggs with candy and goldfish crackers and yogurt covered pretzels. They're in a basket on the living room floor. Nemo has discovered them. He likes to dig in the basket with his paws, pulling one egg out at a time. Then he bats the egg around the carpet, onto the kitchen floor, down the hallway, into the bathroom. He bats it around until it gets stuck or until it cracks, spilling its contents onto the floor. Then he goes back to the basket and pulls out another egg.

He's doing this while we're in bed, trying to fall asleep. Every time I hear him playing with an egg, I giggle. I can't stop giggling.

Cats are clowns.

On this day at foldedspace.org

2005Moderation in Nothing   I cannot seem to practice moderation. In particular, I've been playing too much World of Warcraft lately.

2003Break Time   10:00 a.m. is break time at Custom Box Service.

2002Burn Baby Burn   Eventually I remembered that last summer I had made a rough draft (yes, I really make rough drafts of my mixes) of a mix I called the Happy Sunshine mix. It was full of bouncy upbeat songs perfect for taking a long, fast drive over country roads on a spring (or summer day).

Comments
On 15 April 2004 (08:12 AM), Emily said:

I sometimes think my life is boring, but more importantly, I do not like sharing information about myself. I often to not post because I do not want to share that information even if it is with people that I will likely never meet.

As for the cat story cute. I am surprised that Nemo does not eat the crackers.


On 15 April 2004 (08:50 AM), tammy said:

I would be more interested is seeing the rough draft then the finished paper in this particular story. How about it? Do we get to see the rough draft?

I think there may be a little bit of truth in the thought that beginning writers start with their own story because they are, well, beginners! It's easioest to write your own story. The plot is already laid out for you. the protaganist and the antaganist are all there and you know exactly what form they will take and how the main character will react to them. You also know the end of the story. It is much easier to write biographically. But that doesn't mean that all writers are unskilled if they start with their own story. Look at Angelas Ashes. I believe that was Frank McCourts first book and it was an autobiography and it was powerful stuff! If that's the work of an unskilled beginner then give me the novice any time over the professional writer!


On 15 April 2004 (09:22 AM), Dana said:
The difference between an author and you is that the author truly believes his dull little life is filled with the stuff of dreams.
I once read an author talking about the perennial bugaboo of Where do you get your ideas?

He made a very specific point -- same place as everybody else. The problem isn't having ideas, because everybody has ideas all the time. Constantly. They never let up. The trick is to recognize them, and record them, and then winnow them looking for the best ones. The difference between an author and everybody else, from this author's point of view, is only that the author has learned to harvest what everybody has a bountious crop of.

I like this thought. =)


On 15 April 2004 (01:30 PM), J.D. said:

For those who are interested in what a first draft looks like, I've posted the Half Sister. It's in MS Word 2000 format for now. Sorry.

You'll note that it's really nothing more than a framework at this point, a skeleton on which I can hang the flesh of my story. It's likely to be nearly unrecognizable when I'm finished.

For example, I already know that the first section — the entire first page-and-a-half — will be completely removed from the story. As I mentioned, Jeff and Tony will be compressed into one character. I'll focus some attention on detailing the setting. I'll provide more background on the characters and the dynamic of their relationship. I'll try to give the plot more focus. Whether or not I'll succeed at improving the story is another question.

A first draft is basically a "proof of concept". It's a chance to dump ideas out of your head and to look at them. Then it's time to play with the pieces to see what can be constructed from them...


On 15 April 2004 (01:31 PM), J.D. said:

And, yes, I know all about the typos, including the "myself" in the first sentence. First draft. Keep telling yourself that. :)


On 15 April 2004 (01:34 PM), Dana said:

MS Word? Bah. Real writers use ASCII!


On 15 April 2004 (04:16 PM), tammy said:

Oh my goodness Jd I love that rough draft. You capture the entire feel of the summer. I like the old couch, the pooping bird, the dancing rich girl, the loud almost obnoxious dad, the mother who tries to hold it all together, the boys who are introduced to a world they never knew exisited, the implications of the closed bathroom door... I mean this is got to be your best work ever even if it is a rough draft. This is the stuff books are made of my boy! I'm as excited as if I wrote it myself!!


On 15 April 2004 (04:29 PM), tammy said:

I just went back and reread the story. It reminds me so much of a book Ihave read and I cant put my finger on it. I totally agree that the first part needs taken out . It's really not relevant to how the story evolves.

This story is so good!I mean you can just feel the heat and the flies and Shellys unrest. You sense that the mother had grave reservations as to how all this would work from the beginning. tiny things like the argueing behind the bedroom door are clues that all is not well.

Sigh I wish this were a 700 page book that I could just curl up in a chair and read with my tea.


On 15 April 2004 (04:35 PM), tammy said:

Oh one more thing! DO NOT leave out that part about Seattle where black men live with white girls and there are no flies etc. That HAS got to stay for the final draft!


On 15 April 2004 (04:38 PM), tammy said:

Okay. I'll shut up. I feel so, so, um, restless; like there's just got to be more! Oh (sigh) there's nothing like a good story!


On 15 April 2004 (04:39 PM), Mom (Sue) said:

Just how autobiographical is your story, J.D., because I take issue with some of the events portrayed there. Things didn't happen like that. For instance, Lonnie didn't come down and get Shelley after her first time staying with us -- we took her back home. Or were you trying to make them both realistic and unrealistic at the same time?


On 15 April 2004 (04:44 PM), J.D. Roth said:
Much of the first draft is factual. (Or as factual as I can recall it.)

But most of it is fiction. And it's going to become more fictional as I revise it.

Of course things didn't happen like that. Nothing in the first section happened at all. I made it up! It's fiction! :)

(But it's based on life.)


On 15 April 2004 (05:02 PM), Mom (Sue) said:

Thanks for explaining. I didn't like the mother very well. The flies were definitely real, though! They were terrible!


On 15 April 2004 (05:26 PM), tammy said:

Now see, I liked the mother. She comes across as the gentle one. She has her doubts but she's doing her best to make this work for the good of the family unit. She's much nore intuitive than the blustering dad who thinks everything can be solved by taking Shelley to the movies or singing a funny song. When she turns to go the back of the trailer to do the laundry you know that she knows, as well as the reader, that the problems with this little step sister being incorporated into the family are far greater than just tearing down a room divider so the spoiled rich girl can have her space. You can sense her conflict between her love for her husbands daughter and her own deeper love for her sons. She tries so hard to do what's right for everyone but her mother heart fears for her own little chicks and the disruptrion of the nest. The only time she shows this frusteration is in the scratching of the record. It's actually harder on her than the others because as usual she is more in tune with the family dynamics. Oh it's just all so good. I'll quit blabbing now.


On 15 April 2004 (06:25 PM), Mom (Sue) said:

I was very interested in your thoughts on the mother, Tammy. You picked up on things I hadn't noticed. I never would have guessed it would be as hard to be objective as it is when it's your child doing the writing and the inspiration is actual family events from the past. All the same, I affirm J.D. in his writing and if that mother and those awful flies help him with it, all the more power to him.


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