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10 October 2005 — Sudden Death (6)

Death in literature often serves as a natural focus for conflict, a spark for the plot. (Faulkner's As I Lay Dying and Stegner's Crossing to Safety are two fine examples.) However, the sudden death of major characters bothers me, especially if the death seems random, or if the characters have been prominent in a series of books.

One of my favorite novels is Cold Mountain by Charles Frazier, which tells the story of Inman, a Confederate soldier who deserts his post to walk hundreds of miles across the Carolinas to his home in the Appalachians. Inman eludes death for hundreds of miles, and as a reader you come to expect he will survive the story. Your expectations are dashed, however, when Inman dies within just a few miles of his destination. His sudden death shocked me, and I resented it for a time, but it was not nearly so troublesome as some other literary deaths.

J.K. Rowling has made sort of a habit of killing off main characters lately. She toyed with the idea by killing a minor character in the fourth book, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire. (And how will they deal with that in the upcoming film, I wonder?) She upped the stakes by killing a more prominent character in Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. And rumor has it she gets close to the top in the latest book, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince (which I've not yet read).

Over the past year, I've read nearly the entire Aubrey-Maturin series by Patrick O'Brian (of which Master and Commander is the first and most famous book). I just finished the 19th of 20-1/4 books. In this series, minor characters die all the time, and often without warning. A lieutenant will be standing on the quarterdeck and suddenly his head will be smashed by a flying cannonball. But until this most recent book, O'Brian has been kind to his main characters.

In The Hundred Days, however, he kills a main character (my favorite character) "off stage" in the first few pages. The character is suddenly just gone. (Admittedly the character dies in a way that might easily have been predicted, the particular means of death hinted at for the past couple of volumes in the series.) I was outraged! I sent an angry e-mail to Joel bemoaning the loss of one of my literary friends. Then, at the end of the book, O'Brian kills another main character. My world is shattered! I'm almost afraid to read the last book and a quarter. Will he kill Jack Aubrey himself?

Imagine reading a Hardy Boys book in which Chet is suddenly killed when his jalopy plunges from a cliff outside Bayport, or a Nancy Drew book in which Bess dies from food poisoning. How would you feel?

Maybe these sudden deaths are shocking only because I'm not good with death in real life.

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Comments
On 10 October 2005 (02:22 PM), Lisa said:

My first (and memorable) experience with main characters dying in fiction was a young adult book called The Bridge to Terabithia by Katherine Paterson. It was upsetting.

I'm with you--I don't like my beloved characters to die, especially not violently or unexpectedly. I realize it's not a "rule" of fiction to let your characters live, but still...

(BTW, I once read a book where the first-person narrator lied. Now that's a rule that's harder to give up, even though it the story work.)


On 10 October 2005 (05:18 PM), Joel said:

I heard a writer say in an interview once (and I won't say which writer, as it would distract from my point, which is otherwise unasailably astute) that the ending he desired had to be "earned" with the death of a major character. He meant, I think, that these days, happy endings are more powerful if they're complicated, bittersweet, and balanced. I think we have an instinct for (and I'm almost certainly misusing the term) karma. That some happy endings can only be attained with payment, penitence, or sacrifice.

O'Brien sometimes subscribes to this idea, and sometimes he thinks it's rot. The two deaths that JD is reeling from may be O'Brien's way of saying "Sometimes, bad things just happen, and a wonderful person that deserves in so many ways to go out in a glorious fashion catches a cold, or takes an unlucky punch in a meaningless bar brawl, or gets hit by a car. And dies."


On 10 October 2005 (05:24 PM), J.D. said:

The two deaths that JD is reeling from may be O'Brien's way of saying...

Or they may be O'Brian's way of saying, "I am old and in ill health and may not finish another book, so pshaw! Let's have some fun! Let's kill of a couple of favorites."

As I say: I'm a little frightened to read the last full book. Who dies there? Killick? Say it isn't so...


On 10 October 2005 (07:27 PM), Jim Osmer said:

Stephen King killed off popular characters midway through THE TALISMAN and THE STAND. Anansi dies (not a spoiler) a few pages into Neil Gaiman's ANANSI BOYS. Vonnegut usually kills everybody off. Many writers like mapping out the whole life of their characters.


On 10 October 2005 (08:04 PM), Lisa said:

I think that some differentiation can be made in the types of deaths. A character's full life naturally ending with old age and death is a far more palatable progression than someone dying from a gruesome or unnecessary accident. Somehow, certain writers make even that type of death something I can accept. John Irving, for example, specializes in weird deaths of characters, but it's different.

The really troubling deaths are of those characters that you've grown to like and sympathize with. As in real life, the more attached you are, the more difficult the death is. I can see how after however many of O'Brien's books, you'd be upset to lose a character. At that point, they're old friends.


On 10 October 2005 (09:47 PM), jeremy said:

Tony, if you are lurking would you email me please. I need a salesperson. Are you interested? I'm not at Canby Ford anymore. Northside Trucks.


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